The Heartache February 16, 2007
Posted by Harihar Jha हरिहर झा in English, Poetry.com, Rhymed.Tags: all-pervasive, evolution, heartache. big-bang
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A point behind the intricacy
the heartache is beyond cure
thunderous big bang from your anklet
universe emerging in flashes
The star, planet and satellite
are shining dots from your eyelashes
The clouds just like black-holes
are lamp black for your eyes
billion years have passed
in search of love, the heart cries
since then tears of separation
formed huge ocean for sure
the heartache is beyond cure
You, dancing in fish, flying in birds
In monkeys, humans you are on play
Your craving for love sneaking in reptiles
Darwin lost the way
life with a heart and source of heartache
the heartache is beyond cure
Harihar Rai Jha
Copyright ©2007 Harihar Rai Jha
nice poem with a good flow, and a good story behind it. you used good imagery and you drew the reader into your words. good job. God bless and have a beautiful day.
-richard
WOW harihar my friend this poem is very deep. I am quite certain that you are as well. I am very impressed by this poem and enjoyed it very much. It flows well and I don’t think you should change a thing.
Very well done.
-Amy
It is great poem my friend ,heartfelt and expressive.
Nice flow with very smooth rhyme scheme, well done, you penned it very well.
-Verseman
Well to say the least this is a very interesting poem! I am always up for romantic poems! Great job.
- Teri